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“Fifty Shades of Grey” – Past or Present?

Like nearly every household in America, we now have our copy of “Fifty Shades of Grey” by E L James piled amongst the many other books in our music room, which in any other home would be the living room, except that instead of a giant wide-screen TV bolted to the wall we have a baby grand piano–a 1920s Knabe that we inherited. Anyway, our copy of FSG is displayed casually with other books, not drawing attention to itself but plainly visible to anyone whose eye wanders over the piano top and the stacks of books on the floor and on the little end tables.

To me, as a writer, one interesting feature of “Fifty Shades of Grey” is that it is written in the first person and the present tense:

“I scowl with frustration at myself in the mirror. Damn my hair–it just won’t behave, and damn Katherine Kavanagh for being ill and subjecting me to this ordeal.”

First person is very common, but writing a novel in the present tense is uncommon. It can get tricky, because you are dealing with a narrow temporal window. When is something not happening right now? A few seconds ago? A few seconds in the future? Consider these two sentences:

“Before taking off my shoes, I untie the laces, which are knotted tightly. When I finish this task I place the shoes by the door and go into the bedroom.”

Obviously the actions described have taken place over a period of just a few moments. This kind of temporal sliding is easier to write in the past tense:

“Before taking off my shoes, I untied the laces, which were knotted tightly. When I finished this task I placed the shoes by the door and went into the bedroom.”

The timeline described is more flexible; it seems less rushed, more leisurely. So is there any qualitative difference?

Perhaps. The goal of “Fifty Shades of Grey” is to get the heart pounding (along with other physical responses). The book is all about breathless excitement. The actions do not take place in some undefined past, at arm’s length; they are happening now. It’s cinematic. When you watch a movie, even one set in the distant past, you experience events unfolding now, right in front of your eyes.

Would FSG be as successful if it had been written in the past tense? Good question–but there is no doubt that the author’s use of the present tense heightens the sense of emotional immediacy. It’s easy to imagine that you are there, which is a big reason why millions of women readers find this book to be so captivating.

– Thomas Hauck provides a wide range of ghostwriting and editing services for both established and new authors. When you need your book edited or ghostwritten, contact Tom for a free consultation.

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“Surviving the Game” by Sahpreem A. King, edited by Thomas Hauck

Congratulations to Sahpreem A. King, multi-platinum music producer and author of “Gotta Get Signed: How To Become A Hip Hop Producer.” Sahpreem is back with his long-awaited followup, Surviving The Game: How To Succeed In The Music Business. In this book, which I was honored to edit, Sahpreem shows music industry veterans and newbies alike that success is more than rhymes and beats: you gotta have street smarts and good business sense. Sahpreem shows you how to set up music publishing, control your own marketing and promotion, start an online record label, use the power of social media, and make money from your music without being signed to a big record label. The message is that you need to think of your music career as just that: a career that requires hard work and dedication. Go ahead, sing about girls and dope and Patron, but never forget that at the end of the day, you’re in a very tough and competitive business.

Sahpreem may speak the language of hip hop, but make no mistake: this book works for rockers, country artists, death metal, grunge, dub, easy listening–you name it. Business is still business. Sahpreem is the man who can show you how to make it to the top instead of being just another music biz casualty.

Thomas Hauck provides freelance editing and ghostwriting services for business clients and authors of fiction. For free information on how your book project can become a reality, contact Tom today.

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“The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo” – The Ten Secrets of Its Success – Review by Author Thomas Hauck

I’m an aspiring thriller writer. Whenever I read a successful thriller, I want to know why it’s a hit when so many others are misses or, more frequently, are simply workmanlike product that you read once and promptly forget. “The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo” is as big as they get, and deserves close scrutiny. Here then is my list of the top ten reasons why it’s become a classic.

1. The main plot is a familiar cozy mystery setup. There has been a mysterious disappearance (or perhaps a murder, but no corpse was ever found) on a remote island. There is a finite number of suspects. The pool of suspects include members of a venerable and eccentric family. Does this sound like an Agatha Christie mystery? Of course.

2. A subplot involves a powerful industrialist who, despite his vast wealth, seemingly perpetrates a petty fraud involving a phony factory. The risk is high and the rewards are low. Why? The same question is asked in the James Bond thriller “Moonraker”; when the book opens, Bond and M wonder why the immensely rich Hugo Drax would cheat at cards at M’s private club. This little McGuffin sets the plot into motion.

3. The hero Blomkvist is hired by a wealthy, near-death octogenarian to investigate a young female member of the old man’s family. We’ve seen this same scene in many thrillers including “The Big Sleep” by Raymond Chandler (in that case, the detective was asked to find a blackmailer). It’s familiar and it resonates.

4. There is plenty of tasteful sex. Blomkvist beds various female characters, and provides the promise of one-night, guilt-free, middle-aged lovemaking to millions of male and female readers. The tasteful sex is not described in detail.

5. There is a substantial “cringe factor.” We experience the graphic violence perpetrated upon Lisbeth Salander, which she dishes right back. There are also the murders of the many female victims, which are described in gruesome detail, and the many sick relationships in the Vanger family.

6. Computers play a big part in the book, and Larsson knows enough to be able to describe exactly how Salander works her hacking magic. At least I assume he knows, because I have no idea if his techniques actually work. But the impressive detail gives the book a contemporary sheen.

7. Corporations are vast, unknowable, craven organizations, ruled by selfish tycoons. Always an appealing theme.

8. Nazis are good to have in a thriller too; you can’t lose by including a smattering of these super-bad guys, even sixty-five years after the fall of the Third Reich.

9. About two-thirds of the way through the book we learn that someone is trying to kill Blomkvist. This makes the book a thriller; it’s no longer just a cold case, but a conflict that includes an active agent of evil.

10. The brilliantly conceived character of Lisbeth Salander sets the book above thousands of other competently written mysteries. Her character is fresh, compelling, and she provides the moral foundation that supports the story.

There is much in the book that I skimmed or found boring. I really didn’t care about the fate of “Millenium” magazine (print magazines come and go all the time), and Larsson loaded the book with paragraphs of tedious expository writing (or “information dumps”). The fate of Harriet Vanger seemed obvious from the first page; the moment Henrik reveals that the pressed flowers are related to her disappearance I thought, “Of course, she’s still alive and she’s the one sending them.” When this possibility is never seriously considered by the protagonists, this makes it seem all the more likely.

By my estimate, the book clocks in at a hefty 180,000 words; it could easily have been trimmed to 100,000 with no loss of nutritious content. But this only proves that when you’ve got a reader hooked, they will dutifully slog through the boring parts to get to the good stuff.

– Thomas Hauck provides freelance ghostwriting and editing services for authors of fiction and non-fiction. When you need to take your novel or self-help book to the next level, contact Tom for a free consultation.

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“Spiral Up Yoga” by John E. Groberg, edited by Thomas Hauck

Congratulations to my client John E. Groberg on the publication of his inspiring new book “Spiral Up Yoga: Five Minutes Per Day Lifelong Self-Care Foundation for Body, Mind and Soul,” which I had the honor to edit. This book is that rare breed that bridges the gap between the experienced yoga practitioner and the newcomer. John presents a practical program that makes yoga a part of your everyday life, seven days a week, fifty-two weeks a year. You can do yoga and receive its benefits at work, at home, or on vacation. It’s not the level of difficulty that matters – John’s program can be used by the novice or by the veteran – it’s the approach and your attitude that matter. Try it, and your life could spiral up too!


Thomas Hauck, freelance book editor and ghostwriter, provides literary services to authors both emerging and professional.

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“BANKrupt” by Carol Realini – Edited by Thomas Hauck

Congratulations to my client Carol Realini on the publication of her new book “BANKrupt: Why Banking Is Broken. How It Can Be Transformed” (Searching Finance, 2012). This powerful call to action is not only an expose of the corruption of today’s big banks (writing on that topic alone would be too easy, like shooting fish in a barrel) but it reveals amazing transformations that are happening right now overseas, particularly in India and Kenya. In India, where the population is 1.2 billion, hundreds of millions of people do not have bank accounts. But nearly a billion people have cell phones (or mobiles, as they’re called). The key to turning hundreds of millions of rural Indians into banking customers is an effective bank-government partnership (imagine – the federal government getting involved!) to first launch the Universal Identification Project (UID) so that the identity of every bank customer can be verified, and then to create a mobile-based banking system that can profit from small transactions and deposits.

The banking model being created right now in India might very well leapfrog over the US system, which is designed to profit only from big depositors and squeeze usurious fees from everyone else. “BANKrupt” is a powerful book that everyone with a bank account should read.

Based in Gloucester, Massachusetts, Thomas Hauck provides a full range of freelance ghostwriting and editing services for both new and established authors.

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Ellyn Enisman on Monster.com! Congratulations fron Thomas Hauck, Ghostwriter and Book Editor

Recently I had the pleasure to edit “Job Interview Skills 101: The Course You Forgot to Take” for author and job search guru Ellyn Enisman. The book has been a huge success – it landed her on CNN – and now Ellyn is featured on Monster.com in “12 Tips for Phone Interviews.” Congratulations Ellyn!

  • Thomas Hauck is a leading professional ghostwriter and book editor.
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“Relevant Selling” by Jaynie L. Smith – Thomas Hauck, editor

Congratulations to my client Jaynie L. Smith on the publication of her new book “Relevant Selling: Research Proves Customers Value More Than Just Price,” which I had the honor to edit. This powerful book is the companion volume to “Creating Competitive Advantage,” and together they reveal the secrets to effective targeted marketing. The bottom line? Make sure you offer what your customers really want. Not what you imagine they want or hope they want, but what they really must have. If you can do this, then the issue of price becomes much less important. It’s a valuable lesson that can help anyone – I found that it even applies to my own business!

“Relevant Selling” is from Executive Suite Press. Jaynie L. Smith is founder and CEO of Smart Advantage, Inc., a marketing/management consultancy whose clients range from mid-sized companies to Fortune 500 companies.

Thomas Hauck provides professional freelance book editing and ghostwriting services for authors and publishers.

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Airplane Books – Insight from Professional Ghostwriter and Book Editor Thomas Hauck

As a professional ghostwriter and editor, a significant part of my work involves helping professionals write and publish books that will establish them as thought leaders in their fields. Lawyers, doctors, realtors, CPAs, and business consultants have found that publishing a book can help them reach new markets and attract new clients.

Since self-publishing has become both ubiquitous and affordable, the market for professional books has exploded. Nowadays, if you’re a consultant, having a physical book to give to clients and prospects has become almost mandatory.

Many of my clients ask me what a good length is for a professional book. Of course the answer depends quite a bit on what you, the author, have to say, and the complexity of your message. The important thing to remember is that your target reader is probably very busy and does not have a lot of time to read a long and complex self-help book. Businesspeople, especially, want concise information that packs a punch in a short amount of time.

We’re talking about a total reading time of two hours, maximum. That’s about 40,000 words. Anything longer than that requires too much of a commitment.

That’s why I call the books that I edit and ghostwrite “airplane books.” Why? Because you can put the book in your briefcase or purse, get on the plane in New York, read the book in flight, and by the time you land in Chicago or Atlanta, you’ve read the book.

Los Angeles to Denver, Houston to Boston – wherever you need to go, you can pop the book into your carry-on and read the whole thing in flight.

Airplane books do not pretend to tell the reader every possible detail of how they can improve themselves or their business. The goal is to encourage the reader to seek out your services, and, in a larger “macro” sense, establish you as an expert in your field.

Thomas Hauck ghostwriter, book editor, author

– Thomas Hauck, freelance book editor and ghostwriter, serves authors in Boston, New England, the United States, and around the world. Please contact Tom today to learn more about how you can publish a book that will help you reach your professional goals.

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“Your Path to Success” by Manfred Johannsen. Thomas Hauck, editor

Congratulations to my client Manfred Johannsen on the publication of “Your Path to Success,” which I had the honor to edit. It’s an inspiring fable that recounts the quest of Captain Morgan Starseeker, who questions the wise Ram Sri Omega and receives surprising replies. The book offers spiritual and personal development tools including the seven steps to a life of clarity and happiness, and how to find your passions and values.

 

Thomas Hauck offers a full range of freelance editing and ghostwriting services for both new and established authors. Contact Thomas today for your free consultation.

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Publish Your Own Professional Self-Help Book – Insight from Ghostwriter and Book Editor Thomas Hauck

Unless you’ve been living on a desert island, you know that during the past ten years there has been – and continues to be – a revolution in the publishing industry. One positive effect of these sweeping changes is that professionals – lawyers, CPAs, management consultants, doctors – can now publish their own books at an affordable cost. They no longer need to go through either traditional publishing houses (which are inaccessible) or vanity presses (which are expensive). Today, the wide range of media choices makes it possible to publish and distribute a real book.

Getting Started with a Ghostwriter

I’ve had the pleasure to ghostwrite or edit dozens of books for professionals; many of them are featured on this blog. When I speak with a new client, one of the first things we do is establish the client’s goal. There are usually two reasons why professionals want to publish a book.

1. To educate the reader. The best professional self-help books provide real information. The topic of the book may be how to invest; how to save for retirement; how to live a happier life; or even how to choose a liposuction provider. The topics are endless, but the bottom line is that the reader gets real information that can change their lives.

2. To establish the author as a leader in his or her industry. A professional book is usually not a direct sales tool, although the reader may certainly contact the author for his or her services. The book instead serves to validate and enhance the author’s credentials. When the author speaks at a gathering, it sends a powerful message when the author can offer copies of his or her book to audience members. A book can be a powerful door opener, and can help the author appear on TV or in the media as an expert. For example, a few weeks ago I was delighted to see my client Ellyn Enisman appearing on CNN to discuss her book “Job Interview Skills 101.”

Professional self-help books should be concise; the ones that I write or edit are generally around 30,000 words. That’s about one hundred pages in an average paperback book. I call them “airplane books.” This is because you want the book to be something that a busy person can read in one sitting. You board your flight in New York, and by the time you land in Chicago you’ve read the book.

Professional Book Formats

At a very low cost, books can be published as pdfs that you offer on your website. These ebooks should be shorter – no longer than 20,000 words – because people read them on their computers. Many of my clients release their books on Kindle or another ebook format; there are many from which to choose. Probably the most common choice of format is print on demand (POD), in which the POD provider stores the book files on a server. Whenever anyone orders the book, a single copy is printed. It’s a real book with a full color cover. This is an economical solution for the author; the only drawback is that the price of the book tends to be higher than average for the reason that there is no economy of scale.

Thomas Hauck ghostwriter, book editor, author

Professionals today have many options for publishing their own books. I invite you to contact Thomas Hauck freelance editing and ghostwriting in Gloucester, Massachusetts to find out more about how you can be an author and elevate your reputation in your industry.

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