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“Higher Purpose Venture Capital” by Ron Levin

On September 13, 1970, in The New York Times, economist Milton Friedman published an article entitled, “A Friedman Doctrine: The Social Responsibility of Business Is to Increase Its Profits.” He began his article with a direct broadside at corporate social responsibility:

“The businessmen believe that they are defending free enterprise when they declaim that business is not concerned ‘merely’ with profit but also with promoting desirable ‘social’ ends; that business has a ‘social conscience’ and takes seriously its responsibilities for providing employment, eliminating discrimination, avoiding pollution and whatever else may be the catchwords of the contemporary crop of reformers. In fact, they are—or would be if they or anyone else took them seriously— preaching pure and unadulterated socialism. Businessmen who talk this way are unwitting puppets of the intellectual forces that have been undermining the basis of a free society these past decades.”

Friedman insisted that the exclusive owners – and beneficiaries – of a business are its shareowners. Everyone else connected with the business is an employee, including the CEO, even if he or she is the founder and guiding visionary. Because the managers of the business are handling someone else’s money, they’re obliged to not waste it on frivolous “feel-good” activities that do not produce an immediate cash return on investment.

Friedman wrote: “In each of these cases, the corporate executive would be spending someone else’s money for a general social interest. Insofar as his actions in accord with his ‘social responsibility’ reduce returns to stockholders, he is spending their money. Insofar as his actions raise the price to customers, he is spending the customers’ money. Insofar as his actions lower the wages of some employees, he is spending their money.”[i]

Fortunately, we now know that this so-called “Friedman Doctrine” was horribly myopic, and today’s investors see “the big picture” with much greater clarity. As my valued client Ron Levin reveals in his powerful new book, Higher Purpose Venture Capital, socially responsible businesses and their investors have two key characteristics:

2. Today’s investors are concerned with more than the fastest possible cash return. Today’s world is full of thoughtful, smart people who look at the overall potential for good that capitalism can produce. They are concerned about receiving a solid return on their investment (who wouldn’t be?), but they actually care about how that return was earned. They want to leverage their investment to, at the very least, do no harm, and at the very best make a positive contribution.

3. Socially responsible businesses can be just as profitable as regressive businesses. Perhaps Friedman’s biggest lie was the assertion that managers who invest in socially responsible aspects of the enterprise are less astute or less mindful of profitability than those who are concerned only with the immediate, end-of-quarter cash return. This is ridiculous. The companies that provide substantial returns year after year are often those that make investments in their people, their environment, and their community.

Even with the necessity of the profit motive—which is non-negotiable—there’s an absolute bottom line, in the form of two questions posed to an investor:

“Do you want to use your investment funds to help make the world a better place while fairly sharing in the rewards of doing so?

“If you were ninety years old and your grandchild came to you and asked, ‘What did you do with your money?’ What would you say?”

Higher Purpose Venture Capital is not just a book of theory. It’s a very practical guidebook! Levin presents a portfolio of socially responsible startups that are open to investors. You can dive in and learn about exciting possibilities today… and how to spot emerging opportunities tomorrow.


[i] NYTimes. https://www.nytimes.com/1970/09/13/archives/a-friedman-doctrine-the-social-responsibility-of-business-is-to.html

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“Highwire Act & Other Tales of Survival” by JoeAnn Hart

Congratulations to our family friend and neighbor JoeAnn Hart on the publication of her collection of eighteen short stories, Highwire Act & Other Tales of Survival. This captivating and beautifully written ensemble resonates with recurring themes of change, both in our climate but also in our emotions and politics.

The stories are varied, collected like stray woodland creatures wandering onto a farm looking for a home. All have been previously published in leading literary journals; the earliest, “Woodbine & Asters,” first appeared in Prairie Schooner in 2006. I mention this to assure the reader that these stories are the best of the best, having stood the test of time; as any artist knows, the work you create today is always exciting and the one you hope people will wildly applaud; but the most meaningful art is allowed to ferment and – hopefully – grow more potent with age.

JoeAnn’s characters do not have an easy time of it! She puts them to the test, and they face a slew of personal challeges including mental illness, Covid-19, grief, climate change, and ecological disasters. While as a writer her craftsmanship is unequalled, this is no “cozy” collection; instead it’s as beautiful and bracing as a walk along Good Harbor Beach in early spring, before the tourists arrive, with the wind howling and the grey surf pounding under the warming sun.

Congratulations also to Gloucester artist Hans Pundt for designing the arresting cover art. Highwire Act & Other Tales of Survival is available from Black Lawrence Press and The Bookstore in Gloucester, MA.

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“Get Off Your Cushion: Weaving Meditation into the Fabric of Life” by Li-Anne Tang

Congratulations to my valued client Li-Anne Tang, Ph.D., on the publication of her new self-help book, “Get Off Your Cushion: Weaving Meditation into the Fabric of Life.” The title is self-explanatory! While millions of people recognize the value of meditation in all its forms, too many think of meditation as something that you have to do deliberately and in a pre-determined physical setting. You have to set aside time, they think, and assume a particular posture, such as sitting cross-legged on a cushion on the floor. This means you’re removing yourself from everyday life – stepping outside, so to speak. You’re clearing a space free of distractions to alow your mind and spirit to wander (or focus, as the case may be).

That’s fine, but Li-Anne Tang wants us to look at meditation differently – not as a practice set aside or divorced from “real life,” but something you can weave into your daily activities. Why not bring a meditative approach to your work, your home life, your recreation?

As the book blurb says, whether you want to use meditation to ease anxiety or set yourself on the path towards spiritual enlightenment, with “Get Off Your Cushion” you can learn how to move from stress to serenity in the moment, cultivate continuous mindfulness from dawn to dusk, apply Buddhist teachings to all aspects of everyday life, and ease your suffering.

Reconsider the old habit of meditating only by sitting cross-legged on a cushion! This book can be your guide to bringing meditation to every experience of your life, and show you the path to spiritual awakening.

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Congratulations to Dr. Lisa-Leslie Williams on the publication of “Be FINE: Your Drug Free Prescription to Age Well, Beat Bulge, and Stop Disease”

My valued client, Dr. Lisa-Leslie Williams, has just published her wonderful and groundbreaking book, Be FINE: Your Drug Free Prescription to Age Well, Beat Bulge, and Stop Disease. It’s chock full of ideas and information that can help you live a longer, healthier life without resorting to harmful drugs.

What sets this book apart is Lisa’s boundless exuberance and love of life that comes through on every page. Her Caribbean heritage is the foundation for her approach, and the book is liberally laced with family stories that will both touch your heart and uplift your soul.

And even more, she includes a collection of delicious Caribbean-inspired recipes that are easy to make and super healthy. You can look at this book as a sort of one-stop shop of health advice, fun, tasty recipes, all served up with her unmistakable Caribbean flair. Enjoy!

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I Will Fix Your Lousy AI-Generated Document!

It’s astonishing, but just in the past few months many of my valued clients have sent me files of text – some of them short books with as many as 20,000 words – asking that I edit them. I read the document and then I write back: “Was this written by an artificial intelligence algorithm?” There are many of them competing for your business, including ChatGPT, Jasper.ai, Ryter, Copy AI, Writesonic, GrowthBar, Closercopy, Article Forge, ParagraphAI, and more.

“You can tell it’s AI writing?” they reply.

“Yes, after reading just a few paragraphs. There are many telltale signs.”

Here are just a few dead giveaways that signal low-quality, AI-generated text.

  1. Generic information. A low level of specificity, like looking through a window that’s fogged.
  2. Repetition. The algorithm acts like a bad ghostwriter who needs to crank out the words to fill the page. A hallmark of quality professional writing is the freshness and variety of the text. Once you say something, you don’t repeat it.
  3. In non-fiction self-help or business books written by artificial intelligence software, you’ll see an absence of citations or direct quotes. In professional writing, these make your document or book shine and give it validity.
  4. Lack of humor. AI bots are like, well, machines. A truly humorless bunch. Allowing for a few smiles here and there in the text are not part of their rigid training.
  5. Dogged, repetitious formatting. For example, introductory phrases are often repeated needlessly, because the AI bot doesn’t understand that the human reader can easily remember context.
  6. Wrong information. AI algorithms will find information online that at first glance may seem relevant and accurate, but when you read it closely you see that it’s not what you want and is even misleading.
  7. And one more thing… I’m a far better researcher than any AI algorithm. I know how to dig through the internet and get the information my client needs. When you want to follow the trail of a scent, you hire a bloodhound, not a toy poodle!

Recently a client sent me a book manuscript of 18,000 words. It had been written by ChatGPT. He asked me to add another 12,000 words to make it a real book. But first I had to edit the ChatGPT text. After removing the needless repetition, it was down to 9,000 words! This means that fully one-half the text was zero-calorie filler with no nutritional value. No human reader would have bothered slogging through that morass of boredom. After editing, I had to add 21,000 words to bring the manuscript up to the target word count of 30,000. Not a problem for me!

The moral of the story? If you’re serious about communicating your ideas to your readers and establishing yourself as a leader and not a follower – a lion and not a sheep – then let the AI bots write your memos and provide internet SEO fodder that no one will read anyway. For serious work that you want your readers to love, stick with a professional human writer!

Thomas Hauck, professional book developer and ghostwriter
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Artificial Intelligence Editing Services: The McDonald’s of Literature

Ah, the modern world! So many new technologies that make our lives easier! Some of the most interesting emerging services provide manuscript editing powered by artificial intelligence. A good example is ProWritingAid, which analyzes your text and not only flags obvious spelling and grammatical mistakes – which we’ve seen for years – but makes suggestions for how to re-phrase and even embellish a sentence. The AI algorithm figures out what you want to say and provides a list of acceptable alternatives. It’s easy! As the guy in the 1-800-GOT-JUNK commercial says, “All you need to do is point,” and you’ll have an acceptable document.

AI Editing for Everyone

The good thing about such AI editors is that they make basic editorial cleanup available for anyone. Companies, for example, churn out billions of words every year. They publish blogs and white papers and reports, and these documents need to appear professional and free from errors. Before releasing them, it doesn’t hurt to run them through an application like ProWritingAid to ensure they meet a minimum standard of quality. The service is fast and cheap, and produces a predictable product.

The Fast-Food Editor: Bland Uniformity

If this sounds like a fast-food solution to editing, you’re right. Take McDonald’s, for example. The mission of McDonald’s is to make acceptable, edible food available to everyone at a low price. If you have five bucks in your pocket, you can get a burger and fries at McDonald’s. You can go nearly anywhere in the industrialized world and get the same burger and fries. But this approach has serious limitations. At any fast-food restaurant, you’ll never get a hand-cooked, premium meal. You’ll always be served what the kitchen scientists at the corporate office think you should eat. And what you consume is the same stuff that millions of other people are consuming. This is not a defect of McDonald’s, but a feature.

Services like ProWritingAid, Grammarly, WordVoiceAI, AuthorONE, and many others have the same constraint. They’re designed to deliver bland, uniform results according to the algorithm. This may work well when you’re a corporate communications officer looking for fast and cheap proofreading of your quarterly report. But if you’re writing a book with your name proudly emblazoned on the cover, and you want to deliver a premium product that will rise above the crowded market, the last thing you need is AI powered editing. You don’t want to serve your readers a McDonald’s fast food experience. You want to give them a gourmet meal they’ll never forget and which may even change their lives.

Go to ProWritingAid when you want a fast, cheap product. But when you need quality, hand-crafted editing that transforms your self-help book, business book, or novel from a commercial burger to a premium gourmet meal, you need a professional human editor. I look forward to hearing from you!

Thomas Hauck, professional (human!) book developer and ghostwriter
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ChatGPT: The Race to the Bottom

An artificial intelligence (AI) software service called ChatGPT made its debut in November, 2022. The service is able to produce text that is grammatically correct and designed to respond to a prompt or question. For example, if you say to ChatGPT, “Please provide 10,000 words on how to get a better job,” it can do that.

You can see where this is going.

In February 2023, Reuters reported that over 200 e-books had suddenly appeared in Amazon’s Kindle store listing ChatGPT as an author or co-author. Titles included “How to Write and Create Content Using ChatGPT,” “ChatGPT for Nonfiction Authors,” and even poetry collections. One book promises, “Say goodbye to the tedious process of researching, brainstorming, and drafting – with ChatGPT by your side, you’ll be writing better, faster, and more effectively than ever before!”

On YouTube, TikTok, and Reddit you can find countless tutorials showing you how to create a book in just a few hours. Common subjects include dieting advice, cooking, get-rich-quick schemes, and software coding tips. Children’s books are a growing market – you can give ChatGPT a prompt, such as “How the lonely bunny made friends,” and in a few hours your book, with cute illustrations, is ready to sell.

There is even a new sub-genre on Amazon: “Books about using ChatGPT, written entirely by ChatGPT.”

How does ChatGPT write? It learns by scanning millions of pages of existing text. In response to a prompt, it then spews out a rehash of these sources. This is a cheaper and faster version of what cut-rate human ghostwriters have been doing for years. As you can imagine, there are huge problems with this approach.

• ChatGPT cannot differentiate between legitimate sources and internet garbage.

• The syntax it produces is stiff and conforms to arbitrary rules defined by the programmer. In contrast, exceptional human writers know how to bend the rules.

• It produces the lowest common denominator product with no original insights. ChatGPT books are easy to spot, even by other ChatGPT programs (which makes for a weird circular firing squad).

• ChatGPT has been known to “hallucinate” (this is the actual term!) and write things that are simply absurd.

I Write Innovative Books for Leaders

Fortunately, ChatGPT – and the other chatbots that are sure to follow – will not affect my business. This is because ChatGPT writes by looking at what has already been written and mimicking it. In contrast, my job as a ghostwriter and editor is to ensure that your book stands out from the crowd by being fresh, original, and insightful. You need a book that’s innovative and leads the pack, not one that follows behind. Yes, it costs more to be a leader, but in the long term, the benefits are unequalled. With a professionally ghostwritten book from Thomas Hauck, you’ll be positioned to lead your category and establish yourself as a true authority.

Thomas Hauck, professional book developer and ghostwriter

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Line Editing or Copy Editing? Is There a Difference?

Creating a book manuscript involves many steps, from the initial concept to the final proofreading before publication. To a new author, these steps can seem bewildering – especially when we’re talking about editing.

If you go online to learn about editing, you can become quite confused! You’ll find many types of editing including developmental editing, structural editing, copy editing, line editing, mechanical editing, content editing, evaluation editing, and of course proofreading.

I’m not going to describe them all here; there are dozens of websites where you can find that information. I’m just going to tell you the two types of editing that I do.

Yes, just two. Here they are.

Developmental Editing

Developmental editing is the process of reading a text or manuscript and reviewing it, much like a book reviewer would, only in far more detail. The editor doesn’t make any corrections in the text, but provides a written report and/or makes notes in the margin using Word Track Edits.

The editor responds to the “big picture” items including (in a novel) plot, character, pace, suspense, historical accuracy, or (in a self-help book) the problem being solved, the author’s solution, and examples of success. Developmental editing encompasses those elements that would stay the same if, for example, the book were translated into another language. When that happens, the ideas remain the same but the syntax changes.

Because developmental editing may include deleting sections of text or moving them around, it’s best done before any other editing or proofreading. There’s no point in polishing sentences that may be removed!

Comprehensive Editing

This is what I do for my clients. It’s editing with the goal of producing a manuscript that’s ready to publish. No excuses, no extra charges, no additional steps. Why would an author pay for multiple editors?

I’m always baffled when, for example, a valued client will contact me and say, “I’ve had two other editors work on this manuscript, and I need you to take another pass at it.”

My reply – which I never actually say out loud – would be, “What on earth did you pay those other editors to do? What was the goal – to get more money out of you?”

Why would any editor take responsibility for a manuscript, work on it, and then hand it back, saying, “I did the line editing, but now you need copy editing.” What does that even mean?

It means that the editor saw mistakes and chose not to correct them. Isn’t that crazy?

Can you imagine taking your car to your neighborhood mechanic for new brakes, and the next day the mechanic says, “Here’s your car. But you can’t actually drive it yet. We did 50 percent of the job. Now you need to hire another mechanic to do the things we didn’t do.” I don’t think you’d be very happy!

The Goal Is to Publish the Book!

My job is to get your manuscript ready to publish. To achieve that goal, I’ll do whatever’s necessary. This might include editing, fact checking, ghostwriting, asking you a million questions about what you meant in a particular sentence, pointing out weak spots, and getting rid of redundant “filler” words and sentences. Every job is different because every manuscript is unique and every author has his or her own personal style and approach.

Does comprehensive editing cost more? Sometimes yes, sometimes no. But it’s one-stop shopping. You won’t have to pay multiple editors, which makes budgeting much easier.

To learn more about how I can help you write your book, please send me an email, and we’ll talk!

Thomas Hauck, book developer and ghostwriter
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To be a better writer…. Be a good reader!

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Self-Help Authors: Take Your Reader by the Hand….

Self-help books are all about solving a problem for the reader. The problem faced by the reader could be anything: how to lose weight, get a better job, be happier, invest their money better. When they buy the book, they want answers.

Many of my valued self-help clients–the authors who have a solution to offer–ask me how they should start their book. While they feel confident in their ability to solve the reader’s problem, the steps they want the reader to take are not organized. Their ideas are floating around like clouds in the sky, in no particular order.

I ask the author to imagine a simple scenario. They are in their office and a person walks in. We’ll call this person Sally. The author says, “Hello, Sally. How may I help you?”

Sally says, “I have a problem. How can I solve my problem and lead a happier life?”

I say to the author, “What is the very first thing you would ask Sally?”

You would probably ask her to describe her problem.

Therefore, the very first chapter of your book should be devoted to describing the problem. Not at great length, but enough so that Sally can recognize herself and the challenge she faces.

What would be the second thing you would ask? You would probably ask Sally to describe her goal. That is, the positive outcome she wanted. This could be chapter two, or just a few paragraphs.

Then, you ask Sally what other solutions she had tried that failed.

The Winding Path to the Goal

After laying this foundation, you introduce your solution, and the steps the reader needs to take to implement it. I advise my authors that the process is very much like taking someone by the hand and leading them down a winding path. At each turn of the path, there’s something to see. You show that something to your reader. You say, “See that? Do you understand what it means for you? Good! Now we’ll continue to the next spot on the path.” You just lead them along the path, and they learn as they go. At the end of the path, the reader is ready to put into action the solution they’ve learned.

Every new thing they learn builds upon what they’ve learned before. Lessons are not repeated; once you’ve covered a topic, you move on. The reader’s time is valuable, and you don’t want to waste it!

This pathway simile is not unlike your book outline. Both are like maps or guided tours, and you–the author–are the tour guide. At the end of the tour, you want a happy reader!

Thomas Hauck, book developer and ghostwriter
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